Pitch and Feedback
We pitched the idea for our teen angst to our class using a simple presentation that we elaborated on when addressing everyone.
We got very positive feedback overall, however we were given some ideas on how to improve. We were told that our idea and concept was very well thought out and interesting. They liked the unusual ending as Rose does not get with any of the boys doe to her change in personality.
We were told to perhaps simplify our plot as we had many sub plots. We took out one of the less impotent sub plot to keep the focus on the main character, Rose, and how she is in a love triangle. We were also advised to focus on specific characters that are most important to the plot to prevent our film from being too chaotic and unfocused.
We got very positive feedback overall, however we were given some ideas on how to improve. We were told that our idea and concept was very well thought out and interesting. They liked the unusual ending as Rose does not get with any of the boys doe to her change in personality.
We were told to perhaps simplify our plot as we had many sub plots. We took out one of the less impotent sub plot to keep the focus on the main character, Rose, and how she is in a love triangle. We were also advised to focus on specific characters that are most important to the plot to prevent our film from being too chaotic and unfocused.
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